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Happy Wednesday!
More rocks falling. More Nastajia jumping.
What was I thinking when I wrote these pages????
Sigh. I’ll push through for 3 more of these and we’ll catch up with Felicity.
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Needs some music. With rocks in …
She floats through the air with the greatest of ease….
Is the SMILING in that last frame? !!!
Actually, she can cover some distance this way, as long as the rocky range holds out. Bit of a rough ride though. No complimentary pillow and ear buds with broken rock airways.
Rocks Fall, Everyone Dies
Jokes aside, this page would fit better before the last page. I know it’s supposed to be like a domino effect and she’s on the second pillar here, but, if you step back and look at it, it makes more sense to think of her still on the first pillar, then hit the “back” button on the archives and read that page as the second page in the sequence.
I see what you did there.
Thats kinda what I thought….
Is ANYTHING sturdy in the Nightmare Realm?
I … DO … understand. This is not only tedious in the making but also tedious in the reading. Staj (scnr) toppling from rock to rock, oh the but so enormous hilarity. Totally kills the tension, this. But then, if read in a rush, then maybe it works better. You know, like running pictures. *gg*
Scott, don’t let this tedium bring you down. Just think “oh my, bugger that” and get it done. Despite my nag-nag-nagging, this is wonderful. ^^
I’m glad Nastajia is acrobatic or she would have to quit jumping a lot sooner from exhaustion.
More intense action with the breaking rocks! Looking forward to seeing what else can go wrong and increase the danger!
She is destroing this part of the nightmare realm xD
Taking a closer look at the frames it looks to me like she’s recognized the potential here and is working with it. That last frame she looks like she’s poised for the jump in anticipation of the rock falling. clever girl.
Well, I hope there ‘ll be some surprises, three more page of Nastajia jumping on rocks is not exactly exciting. If only it was a platform game, instead of a comic, at least, I’d feel more involved. I’m more interest by felicity evolving in the “temple”, I’m sure there are better ways to stimulate imagination.
No just one kind of static expression, that shadow is supposed to hide.
Remember, mehdi, eventually this will be a comic book. These pages would go by quickly if you were reading the hard copy.
These pages remind me of platformers lol