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Hi all!
First off. Nastajia isn’t looking up at anything bad. No monsters. She’s formulating a plan.
Secondly… I’m having a 20% off Sale on everything at my Etsy store!
Just use the COUPON CODE: ILOVEFALL
Don’t forget! THIS SATURDAY AND SUNDAY, I will be a guest at
I hope to see some of you there!
Please come visit!
Scott
DREAMLAND IS NOW AVAILABLE IN:
“I have altered my tactics. Pray I do not alter them any further.”
She stop shooting arrows to the incoming skeletons to think a plan?
From what I see the skeletons are rushing on her, there is no second to waste…
Heh, that made me laugh out loud. 🙂
Typical romantic comedy plot. She is going to seduce the skeletons, then her boyfriend will show up and get jealous.
Link in this page’s text to etsy store does not work; I think this is an oversight because the “store” link at the top of the page goes to a different (non-etsy) sale site.
Regardless, I think you get more business if the purple “20% off text” links…
-Pete
*snort* =)
Fast thinker that Nastajia. From her expression it looks like she’s already come up with a plan or has spotted something she can use to her benefit.
Though really ‘Staj, I’d venture these guys haven’t see a good looking babe in a long time. Can you blame them for rushing over for a look see? 😉
Fixed. Thanks!
I agree, the colored text should be a link.
However, clicking the paintings will take you to the store, so it’s not a complete dead end.
Oops, I was a bit too late with my comment.
“cannot” is one word.. #petpeeves 😉
Do you think she try to catch one of those flying things that had her before and make him fly her out?
Scott and team, I’m sure I have told you before, but you are great at this. I look forward to the week just so I can see what is happening next. (Otherwise I would wish it was the weekend everyday.)
Oops, do you think she WILL try…
The whole page does seem a bit “robotic” to me.
ERROR: Unable to continue at current pace!
INITIATING SCRIPT: “Come_up_with_another_plan.bat”
PLEASE WAIT…
(and on next page:
STOP 0x0000001A: Unit overload) 🙂
Seems that she would throw an arrow to the sky …And this would do nothing.
I guess things are looking up.
Or at least Nastajia is.
The way it’s laid out, the split worked for me. I originally read it as “I can NOT continue at this pace.” If it had been one word, it would’ve read, “I CANnot continue at this pace.” I think the emphasis on “not” works. IMHO
(Glad I’m not the only one with grammatical pet peeves.)
Dan wakes up after his first trip to Dreamland. “Holy crap! Alex! I saw Nastajia casually standing on a mountain of corpses that she personally slaughtered.”
Alex: “That’s my girl!”
Dan: “I barely killed a skeleton!”
Alex: “They’re doomed.”
Hope you have a fun time at Baltimore!
I was wondering what she’s staring up for,thanks for clarifying!
If they’re still hanging around, I’m sure they’re content to let the skeletons wear her out before they try to capture her again.
You win an Internet.
“I can *NOT* continue at this pace.” == “I am _able_ _to_ *NOT* continue at this pace.”
“I can*NOT* continue at this pace.” == “there is *no* way I can keep this up”
#petpeeves
What do you see, girl? Do you see a giant dwarf battleship? 😀
Bingo..
“I can fight them, or I can NOT fight them.”
That works. But…
“I cannot keep this up.”